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I am the black cloud
Floating through the night;
You are the flash of light
Bright and destructive and proud.
I am depression,
Creeping along where you lay;
You are the mischievous play
Smirking without hesitation.
I am doom and strife,
What all pretend to not feel;
You are passion, you are zeal-
You are why I celebrate life.
I am darkness and secrets
Which are best kept unknown;
You are curiosity as it roams
Where others would never step.
I am the darkness,
An ever gloomy ray of sorrow;
Yet you only know to grow,
The air in the lungs filling one's chest.
I am lost-
Am I worth the cost,
You, my deliverer,
To be made loved and sure?
I am small
And can easily fall,
But you are never far behind-
That is what makes you mine.
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*CarmineDevian Oct 5, 2012  Student Writer
Very emotional and very good written = very very good
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~BelaRoseWolf Sep 24, 2012  Student Writer
This is a nice poem! :D The similes are good, and I like the style you used here. Great work!
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*CarmineDevian Oct 5, 2012  Student Writer
Hiiiiiii Rosiiieeeee
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~BelaRoseWolf Oct 5, 2012  Student Writer
Hello Carmie~ :D
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*CarmineDevian Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
<3
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